Building Farmaish's Voice and Messaging
I worked on the brand’s messaging: defining its core idea, shaping a distinct tone of voice, restructuring the homepage as an introduction rather than a pitch, and creating clear, human copy across concierge, bazaar, and FAQs.

The Details:
Hamad came to me with a problem Farmaish was facing: how do you market a service which can literally do anything for you? And how do you get through to a local audience when your reference points are all foreign?
The goals:
↠ Clearly explain what Farmaish actually does (without over-explaining)
↠ Build trust quickly for first-time visitors
↠ Create a consistent tone across concierge, bazaar, and brand
The problem:
The product made sense once you used it — but not before.
The homepage didn’t clearly answer:
What is this? What can I do here? Why should I trust it?
Messaging was either too generic (“customer service is broken”) or too functional without emotion. There was no strong hook, no clear positioning, and no shared voice across different parts of the brand.
On top of that, Farmaish isn’t a simple product.
It’s:
↠ A WhatsApp-based concierge
↠ A curated e-commerce store
↠ A service built on trust, not transactions
Trying to explain all of that in one voice — without overwhelming people — was the real challenge.
What I did:
1. Defined the core idea behind everything
Before writing anything, I clarified what actually connects all parts of Farmaish:
↠ It’s not “delivery” or “shopping”
↠ It’s removing effort
↠ It’s taking khwari off your plate
This became the anchor for all messaging.
2. Built a tone that feels local, not “marketed”
Farmaish didn’t need polished startup language.
↠ I pulled from real conversations, interview transcripts, and how people actually talk
↠ Mixed English + Urdu naturally (not forced slang)
↠ Avoided “platform”, “solution”, “seamless experience” type language
The goal was:
It should sound like someone you trust — not a brand trying to impress you.
3. Reframed the homepage as an introduction, not a pitch
Instead of trying to explain everything upfront, I focused the homepage on three questions:
↠ What is this?
↠ What can I do here?
↠ Why should I care?
This led to:
↠ Multiple hero directions (identity-led, reframing, and pain-aware)
↠ Clear split between Concierge and Bazaar paths
↠ Removal of low-impact sections (like generic founder messaging in the hero flow)
↠ Addition of high-clarity sections like “what you don’t have to deal with anymore”
4. Clarified both sides of the product
For Concierge:
↠ Focused on real use cases (groceries, errands, gifting, sourcing)
↠ Explained the process in human terms with local phrases blended in
↠ Highlighted trust (verification, real-time options, accountability)
For Bazaar:
↠ Positioned it as a small, trusted store
↠ “Only what we’d recommend to our own friends”
↠ Removed noise and focused on reliability over variety
The result:
↠ A clear, unified voice across homepage, concierge, and bazaar
↠ Messaging that reflects how people actually use Farmaish
↠ Stronger first impression for new users
↠ Less confusion → fewer repetitive questions from customers
check it out here
